Thursday, October 25, 2007

English Center Piece.

The essay I would like graded would simply be my "POG 2" essay. I find that I put a lot of effort and time into that peice, and I would like that essay to be revised and graded. Althought I find all aspects of the grading rubric, was done very well in my perspective, the 2 sections of the grading rubric I find I did the best in, would be conventions and style.

I had very few spelling and grammatical errors, and my choice of vocabulary and words were very strong. My sentence structures were very well done, and my order of paragraphs were perfect in my sense.

I would also like to be graded on my style. I find I hooked the reader into the essay right from the introduction. I stated my main points, and transitioned them into neat and well thought out paragraphs.

So when you decide to read my "POG 2" essay, please consider my incremented grading rubric sections I want to be evaluated on.


Thank you.

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